Hi .here is my latest remix,I just upload it for you cause just wanna know exactly the problem of that.please tell me all the tips you think that is bad or is a problem in this remix.:)thanks
da link: http://www.4shared.com/audio/xew0Mk0L/Dan-J__Doon-M_-_Come__Take_Me_.html
and hey press thank if you like it:D
then you might post it somewhere else, since around here, we're not that much fans of Hands up 
You're making Hands Up and not italo. The thing is, you're not using the Italo-Bass and the build up is hands up too, so change that
for god sakes NO JUMPSTYLE part in italo 